The Treacherous Path The Narrowing Path Series Book 2 eBook David J Normoyle
Download As PDF : The Treacherous Path The Narrowing Path Series Book 2 eBook David J Normoyle 
In a world that burns up every six years, only the fittest survive. Against all odds, Bowe is still alive.
However, he's on borrowed time. Unless the Bellangers can regain their position as one of the four great families, his whole family will die at the next Infernam. His difficulties multiply when he's attacked and forced to flee the city.
Powerful forces threaten war and rebellion throughout Arcandis, and Bowe has to take advantage of the upheaval or be overwhelmed by it. The second book in The Narrowing Path trilogy takes Bowe on a harrowing journey where he’ll face a terrible decision that will decide not just his future, but the future of the entire society.
The Treacherous Path The Narrowing Path Series Book 2 eBook David J Normoyle
So this is the second in the trilogy (I will not be reading the third), and the writing quality is still horrible. There is still a desperate need for further editing, and the plot makes less sense than before.So our MC was able to maneuver himself in such a way that he, and those of his house were able to get into the refuge, and survive the Infernim. He has until the next Infernim to regain his family's wealth, and things aren't going so well as everyone is still out to get him.
Bowe – the MC – has to flee his castle because of old grievances, and he, and one of his men convince a drunken bum to trade clothes with Bowe, cover themselves in feces, and walk their way past the guards.
Again - everything, and everyone on the surface was burnt to a crisp three years ago so where do these bums come from?
After getting outside the city he's escorted through the forest to a small village where he pretends to be a scribe for an old blind man who used to be a member of Bowe's family. This guy has a lot of records going back decades all written on paper.
How? Every six years the surface of the planet reaches upwards of 1400 Fahrenheit, and everything burns so how can these documents exist?
Were not told, however, very convenient he discovers a document that might save him, and return his family wealth. /golf clap
Yet again he's found out, and has to flee. Admittedly this small part was pretty cool, but the quality of the writing is still lacking.
After he flees he finds out his homeland is being invaded, and after being captured he learns how humans came to this world. A tired, boring, overused, and frankly stupid plot line of how humans destroyed Earth because of technology. Blah, blah, blah.
Finally, in order to stave off the invasion, and save his family he drums up a plan that is savage, barbaric, brutal, and sociopathic to the point I hate him as much as those trying to kill him.
At this point, not even the characters I'm interested in can draw me into reading the final book.
Product details
|
Tags : The Treacherous Path (The Narrowing Path Series Book 2) - Kindle edition by David J. Normoyle. Download it once and read it on your Kindle device, PC, phones or tablets. Use features like bookmarks, note taking and highlighting while reading The Treacherous Path (The Narrowing Path Series Book 2).,ebook,David J. Normoyle,The Treacherous Path (The Narrowing Path Series Book 2),Fiction Dystopian,Fiction Fantasy General
People also read other books :
- The Devil Dictionary eBook Ambrose Bierce
- The Future of Love edition by Adjiedj Bakas Health Fitness Dieting eBooks
- The Experience Wellness Project Your Health is My Business eBook Bob Coleman Bill Pierce
- Storiez A Do It Yourself Guide Meagan Corrado 9780997004946 Books
- The Nightgown A Carter Ross Story Carter Ross Mysteries eBook Brad Parks
The Treacherous Path The Narrowing Path Series Book 2 eBook David J Normoyle Reviews
Review of The Treacherous Path (The Narrowing Path Series Book 2) kindle edition by David J. Normoyle.
I dove into this sequel to The Narrowing Path right away, because I really enjoyed reading the first part of the series. I enjoyed it, but it isn’t as good as its predecessor.
The story and plotline continue in a good flow, are exciting, and of similar quality as those in the first book.
However, there is more of what I call emotion-telling. It’s where an author tells you ‘Jimmy was sad’, instead of telling you about the quiver of his lip and the way he takes a deep breath before he steps inside the bar. It’s not necessarily a bad thing and a lot of writers do it (myself included), but it get annoying when there’s too much of it. David Normoyle also used this method in the first part of the series, but there I noticed it less. There’s enough of a mix-up of styles to still make for a nice read, but I would have liked to see a little less emotion-telling.
Also, I think the book could use one final edit. There are a number of what I suspect are typo’s of the kind no spelling checker catches. (I noted most of them and will make them available to the author, because there is little as evil as telling a writer there’s a typo in his book, but not what or where it is.) It’s not the end of the world and quite some professionally edited books have them. At the last part of the book there are a few sentences that suggest that parts have been taken out, leaving hiccups in the way they read. All in all, not serious enough to prevent you from enjoying this book, but enough to catch my eye and mention it.
A nice read and I have high hopes for the third part in the series.
On a personal note, if you enjoyed reading The Treacherous Path, you might also like these stories
A Dwarf With No Name (Nameless Dwarf Book 1)
Book of Magic A short sword & sorcery fantasy story (Tales of Mufroen and Dun 2)
Dreamsongs Volume I
Haven't read yet
it was a great story
So this is the second in the trilogy (I will not be reading the third), and the writing quality is still horrible. There is still a desperate need for further editing, and the plot makes less sense than before.
So our MC was able to maneuver himself in such a way that he, and those of his house were able to get into the refuge, and survive the Infernim. He has until the next Infernim to regain his family's wealth, and things aren't going so well as everyone is still out to get him.
Bowe – the MC – has to flee his castle because of old grievances, and he, and one of his men convince a drunken bum to trade clothes with Bowe, cover themselves in feces, and walk their way past the guards.
Again - everything, and everyone on the surface was burnt to a crisp three years ago so where do these bums come from?
After getting outside the city he's escorted through the forest to a small village where he pretends to be a scribe for an old blind man who used to be a member of Bowe's family. This guy has a lot of records going back decades all written on paper.
How? Every six years the surface of the planet reaches upwards of 1400 Fahrenheit, and everything burns so how can these documents exist?
Were not told, however, very convenient he discovers a document that might save him, and return his family wealth. /golf clap
Yet again he's found out, and has to flee. Admittedly this small part was pretty cool, but the quality of the writing is still lacking.
After he flees he finds out his homeland is being invaded, and after being captured he learns how humans came to this world. A tired, boring, overused, and frankly stupid plot line of how humans destroyed Earth because of technology. Blah, blah, blah.
Finally, in order to stave off the invasion, and save his family he drums up a plan that is savage, barbaric, brutal, and sociopathic to the point I hate him as much as those trying to kill him.
At this point, not even the characters I'm interested in can draw me into reading the final book.
0 Response to "[CNS]≫ [PDF] The Treacherous Path The Narrowing Path Series Book 2 eBook David J Normoyle"
Post a Comment